festive season

this is just one of those poems, just random thoughts.

festive season..

embeded in festivals

feastings on every street corner.

 

season's greatings

greating echo from

every passer by.

smiles are the passes of the day.

 

so dont spoil the

festivity of the season..

during feasts.

how do i know that there will be feasts..

thats because it is a festive season.

with many festivals,

so no clenched fists will be torolated..

during any of the feastings.

 

but open your heart..

receive the love and joy..

enjoy and rejoice.

because he allowed you the chance

and pour out some love for others..

during this season..!!

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

 

 

Author's Note

YEY... DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY. I WROTE THIS POEM WHEN I WAS READING FOR MY MOCKS. JUST A RANDOM THOUGHT, DIDNT WANNA LOSE THE POEM, SO THOUGHT I SHOULD PUBLISH IT AS SOON AS I CAN,... LOVE YOU ALL!!

Reviews

[kelvin]

Tis the season my friend for here you put a nice scene where everyone is getting along smiling faces and having joy in the heart. In celebration of internationally know time. No needs for violence or hatred so let us rejoice and remember what x-mas is all about. As always keep writing fellow writer Nice read

[luviva]

thanxx for your words my friend!
they are truely insipiring and encouraging

[kelvin]

You're very welcome

[khalid]

as a muslim, we believe in jesus as a prophet, we use the Gregorian calender although we have our own calender, nothing in that since Christ for us is a messenger sent from God to all mankind as well as all prophets. and no problem for us to say Merry Christmas and happy new year to all our Christian brothers and sisters in humanity. mutual respect is what humanity really needs..
thank you for the nice poem..

[luviva]

absolutely ryt!! and thanxx for the review!!

[khalid]

my pleasure

[DrD]

Excellent sentiment appropriate to the season. There's never anything to criticize when the message is based upon love and good greetings.

[luviva]

yey... thank you soo much!!

[Damien Davison]

A warm welcome to the holidays, thanks for sharing. Happy holidays!

[luviva]

happy holidays 2!! en thanxxx for the review

[scripted]

the holiday season is hear... my favorite season
a time to come together and embrace the moment

[luviva]

yey.. and eat!! dont 4get that

[}Echo{]

I like this. This is really cool. :)

[luviva]

thanxx :D

[}Echo{]

:D

[David Scott]

I need to remember this... Ha
"so no clenched fists will be torolated.." Maybe meant tolerated... Still my favorite line.
Be well.

[luviva]

yey.. sorry about the grammer.. it happens but am just so excited to post it rather than correct them.. thanxx for the review my friend!!

[Siren]

festive, for sure :) joyful. i love that you talk about feasts so much...of course, since i haven't eaten yet today it just makes me more hungry. well done!

[luviva]

but you will eat, the fesitivity doesnt end till the 5th of january!! still time to catch up. thanxx for the review!!

[Siren]

Of course I'll eat xD I loooove food! :P

[luviva]

hahhah,.... loolzzzzzz

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Wow! this is good in its structural arrangement; it create a mental picture of this month. Good work.Thanks

[luviva]

thank you so much!!