festive season

this is just one of those poems, just random thoughts.

festive season..

embeded in festivals

feastings on every street corner.

 

season's greatings

greating echo from

every passer by.

smiles are the passes of the day.

 

so dont spoil the

festivity of the season..

during feasts.

how do i know that there will be feasts..

thats because it is a festive season.

with many festivals,

so no clenched fists will be torolated..

during any of the feastings.

 

but open your heart..

receive the love and joy..

enjoy and rejoice.

because he allowed you the chance

and pour out some love for others..

during this season..!!

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

 

 

Author's Note

YEY... DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY. I WROTE THIS POEM WHEN I WAS READING FOR MY MOCKS. JUST A RANDOM THOUGHT, DIDNT WANNA LOSE THE POEM, SO THOUGHT I SHOULD PUBLISH IT AS SOON AS I CAN,... LOVE YOU ALL!!

Reviews

[kelvin]

Tis the season my friend for here you put a nice scene where everyone is getting along smiling faces and having joy in the heart. In celebration of internationally know time. No needs for violence or hatred so let us rejoice and remember what x-mas is all about. As always keep writing fellow writer Nice read

[luviva]

thanxx for your words my friend!
they are truely insipiring and encouraging

[kelvin]

You're very welcome

[Devanshu Rajput]

'HAPPY NEW YEAR'....ya i know it's quiet late...really festival is a great time...everyone wait's for everyone in this world...you wonderfully described the time of festival...keep writing...!!!!!!!!!!

[luviva]

thanxx D

[Devanshu Rajput]

your welcome

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Luviva, I had no idea about your age group ( I thought that you were an adult)but now I'm getting a more precise picture, this is a thoughtful kind gesture and I hope that your mock exams went well.

[luviva]

yeh they were real good now preparing 4 jan exams...,
en sorry about the age thing i will put it in ma profile
thanxx anyways :D

[Shellie]

It is good as it is, but it needs a little something, I'm just not sure what.

I read it again there...it's only the spelling mistakes etc. Fix that up and its lovely the way it is. It is all over the place alright, but the message sticks anyway. Its a good job!

[luviva]

thank you ..
real appreciate it!!

[Danielle]

Lovely and a great positive message, if only there could be more love and joy in the world, it starts with each individual. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and all of us here on Writerscafe!

[luviva]

thank you soo much!!

[Kyle Sky]

Good. The athmosphere was a little dull, but it still presented the strength of the festive season of December. Great job.

[luviva]

thank you... so much!!

[Tarry Franck]

Enjoyed reading this. The ending is great :) Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too - even tho I will be saying it to you again as the time draws near.

[luviva]

ok, merry christmas.and thnaxx for the review.

[beautiful dreamer]

lol i love it. its kinda all over the place but it makes it interesting! great job!

[luviva]

thank you soo much!! :D

[AYVID N]

Loved it and getting ready to go home for X-Mas! Thanx for cheering me up!

[luviva]

yey.... X-MAS time. great you are joining family. thats the best part of this season's fesitivity.read moreyey.... X-MAS time. great you are joining family. thats the best part of this season's fesitivity.

[Ahmad Cox]

Very true and a joyful write. I know I haven't really celebrated most holidays with the whole family bit this thanksgiving me and my mom and sister went to our first ever family thanksgiving and it was really nice to be able to connect and have fun so this poem reminded me of that.

[luviva]

thats great!!
so do it again tthis time round...