pretty perfect precission

pretty perfect precission

A Poem by luviva
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u r perfect the way u r, dont change for the world. FOR he made u perfect for the world.

"

you are perfect!

You are pretty

You are precious.. and#

You were made to great precission.

WHO are you now?

WHAT has become of you?

WHERE is the precission in your works?

 

the PIERCINGS,

the TATOOS,

the ARTIFICIAL ENHANCEMENTS.

 

he MADE you the best.

he MADE you the beauty.

he MADE you the most precious of all.

 

Y change it for the WORLD?#

Y the breast enhancements?

Y the fake plastic bums?^

 

the ANSWER is simple.

the LACK of love for yourself

FALL in Love with youself...

and you won't even think of whatever

you are thinking of to do?

 

the DOOM is falling in Love with the

WORLD!

YOU will do anything

to be that person you are NOT

meant to be!!

© 2012 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
to all you my beloved readers! am sorry if am being so open minded and if i hurt anyone in the due course! the fact is that we shouldnt change ourselves for we are beautiful, perfect , pretty and precious. those piercings, tatoos, and whatever just paint a whole lot different picture of who you are. but if they have a strong story behind them, then go for it these are just my views...

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I can see your point on the other enhancements but the tattoos, I have to agree with Damien. However, I only have three but they tell a tale of me.

Very expressive piece - good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

then if they hold a part of your life they are ok!! and thanxx for the review.
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

:)
Actually, tattoos tell a story, I have 51 myself and every one of them tells a part of my tale. I got them to make me who I am. I think we just have different views on tattoos... Thanks for sharing, everyone is entitled to their opinion!

Posted 11 Years Ago


luviva

11 Years Ago

i completely agree with you, if they are part of who you are then thats ok. but some people tend to .. read more

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luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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