sacking the life out of it.

this is just about smoking and its dangers...

as you stand in the water shed,

sucking the life out of it

blowing it's

  breath away,

you watch as it drifts off in air

right in front of you.

 

you enjoy it now,

and it says nothing, but one day

just wait one day..

it will be back for you

suck the life out

you

as once you did to it.

 

the cigarrete can be your

bestfriend now

for now

but it will be your sworn enemy

once you know it's

hidden agenda.

 

it helps you 4get yo worries now,

taking all yo fears and anxieties with

its smoke to far lands..

 

one day it willl be back for you

taking you with it, to the far lands

thats when the truth will hit you,

that it was doing you no justice that day..

but it was helping you dig your..

grave.

Reviews

[luviva]

just love en enjoy it!! its kinda of educative

[khalid]

i think this poem should be stuck on every cigarette packet instead of such writings already found on them such as smoking is bad for health...but i dont think cigarettes producing companies can ever let this to happen because i dont think they can find anybody to sell to if they do it...
but i hope every teenager reads it before he gets into the habit of smoking. i hope every smoker would read it and think of it.
i have really enjoyed reading it

[luviva]

thanxx.. i really appreciate it