play thing

this is about hearts... boys dont treat gals hearts like play toys..

its bound to be a play thing.

depending on what you decide

its you to make that

decision       

 

And the degree of accuracy

or the extent to which it

is used, will entirely depend

on who you entrust

your heart to.

 

mine is a heart, not a

"play thing"

i entrusted it to him, the first of all the

possible people who could

ever own ma heart.

but he played with it

thought it was a

toy!

thought he would own it 4ever

not knowing that i still owned the power to

withdraw.

 

En when i took it away...

He cried like a baby who has just

lost their favourite toy...

he didn't realise how much he would miss it.

 

but the only difference was that mine was a heart

and it was bound to remain like that.

i protect it with the strongest armour...

i dont wanna have a hole in the place of a heart.!

no body is ever gonna play with it.

 

 

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

I love the spirit in this poem. You weave the story in this poem with pride and disdain (toward those that would make a plaything of a heart, that is), rather than hurt or sadness. and you show us that hearts are not playthings There is absolute determination in the last too lines "I dont wanna have a hole in the place of a heart/no body is ever gonna play with it", that brings the poem to an end with a sense of closure.

Totally true. Honest, and doesn't try to spare anyone of anything. Great job! :D

[luviva]

ohh thanxx soo much!! that was really insipirational!!
JOAN

[Rose of Gondor]

:D Welcome!

[Kyle Sky]

Such truth in this poem. The message was very strong. Truly there is no doubt that the strength of the poem is in its message. A heart shoul only be treathed with delicate passion. Great piece.

[luviva]

thank you sooo much!! thats been really constructive :D

[David Scott]

Hard to tell someone who has been treated like a plaything that we must be willing to risk to know love... Just make sure the armore is not fused in place.
This poem feels young, but it feels honest.
Be well.

[luviva]

thankss........ i will try i guess!! :)

[khalid]

i love the spirit of challenge and pride you have shown in this poem. this is the third poem i read for you, the first two were like advice to all people, they had great message, this one is the first with love stuffs, it has great advice as well but this time the group aimed is those who fall in love..you ask them not to let their own hearts to be taken for granted...im completly related to this...i can say, love is so sweet but if it is hurting, lack of love is the best this way..but since i love your poem, i feel its sweetness..

well done reallyy

[luviva]

thanxx sooo much!!

[khalid]

my pleasure