where would you rather be???

this is just a thought provoking poem/.

yes, its aquestion!

where would you rather be?

 

ohh yeh.. i knew it!

before u said it..

so u would rather be in the cinema..

where people swear their heads off

when a scene is played..

where it gets all stinky when people

4get the use of lynx.

 

or the cafe..

probably the shopping mall

or the library,.. thts just too nerdy

 

but u know wt..

i would rather be in my bedroom.

the perfect get away from it all

the cruel world outside..

where nobody cares.

 

boring!!

oh yeah i knew u would say that.

but it doesnt need it be boring

if u r the music lover..the answer is

downloading music onto your phone or any device and chill out.

for the geakky ones... u only have to bring the library down with u o your bedroom.

 

the place where you can be you.

gazing out the windows.. when you are done

admiring what nature has got to offer..#

the perfect get away from it all!!

Author's Note

i wrote this poem the first time round and i lost it/... the i was like no am not redoing it.. but the thought kept on nagging me at the back of my mind untill i settled down en put it into writing here...
read, enjoy, love and review!!
ohh en criticisms welcome

Reviews

[Michael of Gilead]

One can not watch the world behind a window and truely enjoy it.
Course settling in your chamber where all is but a fingertip away is nice, comfortable and safe....living life safe is not the way to go..imho

I take the mis-spellings and slang as tone?

[luviva]

yeh its ment to be a bit conversational. but i agree with you with the first line. but that depends on what kind of person u r. outgoing, the lonely type, etcc
but all in all. thanxx fopr the review!!

["Longing from Ages"]

amazing write with realistic thoughts....rly liked as its provoking too

[luviva]

thanxx for the review..

[khalid]

people are completly different in this issue, some are homy while some dont like it..thats life..

[luviva]

thanxx..but i just wrote out my feelings it was athought that kept on nagging me till i wrote it