the light within

this is about one's soul... the light that guides your way

the light within.

it shines bright

and burns brighther

than the sun

inside your soul

 

it is it

that guides your ways

along the rightful path..

 

it shines even brighther

when let out..

shine forth your light

for all to see...

its the oxygen that kindles your light

 

 

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

Truly a wonderful piece. i like the idea.
but in truth,i dont like the struture of the poem, it loses it's attractiveness when read aloud. Still I cant deny the beauty of the poem.

[luviva]

thanxx for the review!!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

an enjoyable take on a basic need, lovely writing, thanks

[luviva]

thanxx for the review

[Ahmad Cox]

Very beautiful. The light truly does live inside of us.

[luviva]

thanxxx/...... for the review