whats the truth in it?

whats the truth in it?

A Poem by luviva
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its just the fact that its sooo hard these days to believe what someone says.

"

so why should i believe you now?

for what i know is you are never honest

truth has lost its meaning..

you lie about it all

to protect you own skin..

 

after knowing all that about you

you expect me to believe you now

why now among of all times?

when all it is ,

is just burrying the truth and getting your own way

 

i can nolonger trust

you, him, her, them

or even the human race

i learnt the hard way..

the only person i trust is.......

me!!

© 2012 luviva


Author's Note

luviva
its just.. i dont knw why i wrote this but just enjoy, read critcise and ohhh yeh dont 4get to review

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The feeling that everyone needs to be rejected because of past failures has marred many lives and you bring forth the bitterness that results. The passion of this work also has resentment pouring from the wounds of each word and the reader is led to believe this comes from personal experience. I think this is a very good work with the only correction of "burying" instead of "burrying."

Posted 12 Years Ago


luviva

12 Years Ago

ohh thanxx... DrD i wrote it after remembering a certain song that we usually sang in primary school.. read more

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luviva

KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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I am me... but further more, I am fundraising for TEARFUND a christian charity organisation working with local churches in deprived areas to create everlasting change. TEARFUND has patterned with .. more..

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