pen & paper

this is just about developments taking place.... was revising when the idea poped into my head

ohhh dear friends....

you were there for me

through tough and thin...

right from the start untill now...

 

its because of you two

that i can now be able to read and write..

because of you that i have a future

 

but where are you now...

as envision my future...

your's is blurry..

not as shiny as it once were..

 

yo popularity has been ripped away

by the megadevelopments..

you are 4gotten now...

 

from Desktops to laptops

from Laptops to Palmtops

from palmtops to tabloids

from tabloids to tablets...

 

ohhh....

sweet friends...

you have been over shadowed by them

wherever a new technology is developed...

they rejoice not knowing that its the work of your hands!

its because of you two that the developers are able to make those developments

they sketch them using a pen, and sketch them on the paper,,...!

 

but they give the credits to the developers...

they are all disloyal to you...

but i, your loyal and trustworthy friend..

i will be there for you..

and i declare am 4 u...!!!

4ever and ever more..!!!!

Author's Note

just think about it.. with computers developing day by day... pen and paper are 4gotten,.. it will com one day when they are no longer needed!

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi Luvivia, I like your tribute to old fashioned scibing here!

[luviva]

thanxx.. bt dont knw whether i will resist the technological advancement

[JiDonnelly]

I loved it up until what seemed to me a rushed ending.
I love the last stanza just the very last two lines I read are rushed.
Beautiful job nevertheless!

-JiDonnelly'

[luviva]

thanxx for the review i will look at improving it,.. may be add a few more stazas?????/ thanxx again
luviva

[JiDonnelly]

It doesn't need improved as such, it is beautiful the only thing it
really lacks is credit.
For all I know you spent hours on those last lines
I am only telling you from a personal opinion, Don't take it so seriously
and change any of your work.
It is top notch' just the way it is.

-JiDonnelly'

[luviva]

okkkk thanxxxxx