we r one

we shldn't encourage segregation en discrimination! i just pity people who do it coz we r one, brothers en sisters whether u like it o nt

we r one,

you, me, us and them...

we r one

 

even the setting shows

we may be different but we r one

there several countries, seven continents

but there is still one world!

 

the fact that

we breathe the same air,

we have the same creator..

that makes us one

 

the language we speak,

the colour of the skin or

country of origin

they dont matter.

 

so all i ask is..

forget the differences

and focus on the similarities

 

stop fighting,

for it just tears us apart

and leaves us un healed wounds..

embrace the brotherhood!

love you all.....

Author's Note

yeh this is just i dnt knw.... all i knw is we r one read, love en review.. sorry if i offended anyone in the course.

Reviews

[Damien Davison]

Heh, in a perfect world! Too much ego nowadays though, hardly anyone is on the same page... Good job though, very optimistic.

[luviva]

thanxx...

[Kyle Sky]

I love idea and completely agree with it. I want this idea to spread...

[luviva]

thanxx for the support, en 4 reading en reviewing

[Kyle Sky]

your welcome. you can expect more reviews from me.

[luviva]

i will return the love....

[Anonymous Girl]

THAT WAS SO GOOD!! Its like you read my mind!! Loved it!!! Its going to sit in my library!!!
Well done Luviva!! :)

[luviva]

thanxx for the review,

[Anonymous Girl]

No probs :)

[Pax]

we live on the same world, it's just that human nature and the balance of all things are somewhat inbalance... the excessiveness of greed, judgement, selfishness, darkness and etc... are all inbalance... to much of it erases the good nature of our well being...

ps. there is no offensive tone in this write...
Wonderful write!

[luviva]

thanxxx for the review en feedback

[Dr. Wood ?]

As my Mother used to say to me..to pick on a man because of the colour of his skin you may as well go to war with anyone with ginger hair...or freckles...We are ALL human beings..Full Stop

[luviva]

i love that one... go to war with a anyone with ginger hair... she was ryt !! en thanxx for the review.

[MOON]

How can this offend beautifully conveyed indeed we are one and the more we embrace the less suffering there will be in this world.

[luviva]

absolutely ryt... i agree just wish other people also realise this soon enough!!!!! we just need a little peace in this world.

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow, wonderful poem and even more wonderful message. I really appreciated this one

[luviva]

thanxxx for the review.... and i hope everyone gets the message.