we r one

we shldn't encourage segregation en discrimination! i just pity people who do it coz we r one, brothers en sisters whether u like it o nt

we r one,

you, me, us and them...

we r one

 

even the setting shows

we may be different but we r one

there several countries, seven continents

but there is still one world!

 

the fact that

we breathe the same air,

we have the same creator..

that makes us one

 

the language we speak,

the colour of the skin or

country of origin

they dont matter.

 

so all i ask is..

forget the differences

and focus on the similarities

 

stop fighting,

for it just tears us apart

and leaves us un healed wounds..

embrace the brotherhood!

love you all.....

Author's Note

yeh this is just i dnt knw.... all i knw is we r one read, love en review.. sorry if i offended anyone in the course.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

A universal truth told beautifully...thanks a lot for sharing..

[luviva]

welcome, en thankk for dropping by..!!
much appreciated!!

[Rose of Gondor]

Beautiful message, one that I hope will spread across the world some day! We all have our differences, but we are one, because we exist together! I wonder why people sometimes choose to see the differences instead of the similarities, and I'm quite sad that they do so!

[luviva]

ohh thank u sooo much!!

[Rose of Gondor]

:D

[scripted]

I THINK I JUST FOUND MY TWIN... I LOVE WRITING ABOUT THIS WORLD AND WHAT IT HAS COME TO THIS WAS A GREAT POEM AND YOUR A GREAT PERSON.THANKS FOR OPENING YOUR EYES AND SEEING THE TRUE MEANING BEHIND THE WORLDS PROBLEMS

[luviva]

thank you sooo much! that was really very nice of you.. en u got it!! we are twins, just love writing about this world!

[C.C. Marx]

Being young I understand the need to use abbreviations (I'm so lazy) but like David said below they are kind of distracting however the message was very sweet great job :)

[luviva]

thank you soo much!! for the review and reading!!

[C.C. Marx]

Your very welcome

[David Scott]

I liked your tone and posstive outlook. A good poem for the world to read. The abbreviations were a bit of a distraction for me. It is fine for a less serious tone but it is not true to the tone if this poem for me.
Enjoyed your thoughts here.

[luviva]

thnank you soo much!!

[luviva]

sorry about the abbreviations but it was kinda of intentional to use it because the major descrimination issues occur in youths.. so i wanted to use a youth language for them to relate to. buit you are right!! i will rectify that next time.

[bob, small b. aka invs]

love the sentiment, hate the execution. i can't stand text abbreviations used in poetry. poetry celebrates language. show it some respect. is it really that hard to type two extra letters in the word "are"?

[asdarkeyesclose]

'stop fighting,
for it just tears us apart'

i agree with the sentiments, there is only one world but we need to get on with things and in the way that is best for everyone, i'm a bit of an idealist on the quiet and i agree with what you are saying. fantastic.

[luviva]

thank you.. just wish many agree with me and see the bad things of noticing the differences.

[Sami Khalil]

A good message poem.

[luviva]

thank you...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[khalid]

this is great really. i am so much related to this poem that i feel you have taken the words from my tongue....even if you could dress them in a very nice suit to sound like how they sound now...

[luviva]

thank you soo much