what if...

have u ever thought...

and thought really hard

about this?

 

what if....

what if every thing was

as it was ment to be..

 

what if peace and order

were observed in every

way of life,

 

yeh.. what if..

the farmers..

farmed their farms

normally... only them and the tools

 

what if...

the governers

leaders were loyal and honest

to the people they served

 

yes!

what if me and you..

the whole community

looked out for each other

maintained peace, and worked

hand in hand...

 

the police...

yes what if they

carried out their duties

properly...

and worked for justice,..

 

yes, tell me

what if the parents and their kids

were to live in mutual respect for each other

would there be street kids, drug dealers,

criminals?

 

just imagine if the world

was a safe, secure and paeceful

place that you so often dream of..

 

i just have that dream...

but it only stays at the back of my mind

because i know... its just a fantasy

with this caotic world...!

Reviews

[Starr Mist]

This would be the most perfect Utopia is that... unfortunaltely no where on earth is there a Utopia, just dystopias all over. :(
Great poem! Great insight on what a Utopia would be like, but if we lived in a Utopia, would we need police? I think not... :) Just a thought.

Starr

[luviva]

ohh thanxx... i knw we wldnt need the police every thing wld b so flawless... i just wish

[luviva]

en thanxx for the review...

[Jo March]

Did you mean chaotic? You use a few too many ellipsis, but the concept and sentiment are lovely. Nice.

[luviva]

thanxx. i will rectify the ellipsis, i just need to get better at writing poems i have only just began
but thanxxx

[Gina]

Yeah, but all of that would make life pretty shallow and boring.

[luviva]

kinda right but.... it would give us the freedom to roam the streets without looking over our shoulder.. thanxx for the review

[Gina]

Yeah, I get it. It does seem better, it is. But imagine: how boring life would be like that?