the single tear drop.

its just i dnt knw... just read en love it if u can

that single teardrop

it only comes when i think

real hard about it

thinking of what i lost

moving away from the people 

i have know, the people who have loved me

i belonged to them and they belonged to me

i felt there love even when they were away

just can't bear o think about it

as i go to sleep, thinking about it

i just wipe it away

consoling my self 

that one time one day

i will be back to them

and they will embrace me just like 

they did, en just like that 

i will be their's again

and them, mine forever

never to part...

Author's Note

just love it... en any constructive ideas r welcome, thanxx again

Reviews

[Danielle]

Very nice!

[luviva]

thanks!

[Danielle]

You welcome

[DrD]

Separation is a constant poetic theme but what I like about your work is the plurality. You are separated from family, from friends, from classmates . . . . someone and it becomes unimportant who they are because the emotions become the theme. An admirable job with fine technique.

[luviva]

thank you so much doctor!!
am so much humbled by your constructive reviews

[David Scott]

I think this was easy to just read and love it... This poem felt like the tear. Not anything overly self indugant as a good cry, but just one simple tear that holds more meaning than a puddle of tears ever would...
Enjoyed the read dear luviva

[luviva]

THANK YOU SO MUCCH!!
this poem holds alot of meaning for me!!
and all those who know the feeling of moving from place to another and having to start all over again, new friends, place, everything!!
thanxx again

[Frieda P]

It's melancholy, bittersweet and a lovely read. Well done.

[luviva]

thank you..!!

[}Echo{]

Sad but also inspiring. I like this. Great write. :)

[luviva]

real appreciate it, thanxx for the review

[}Echo{]

:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Very sad yet pretty at the same time. I reaklly enjoyed it.

[luviva]

thank you real appreciate it!!

[Tarry Franck]

Sad yet inspirational. Great piece. Enjoyed reading it.

[luviva]

thanxx sweety!!

[Tarry Franck]

You are quite welcomed :)