the single tear drop.

its just i dnt knw... just read en love it if u can

that single teardrop

it only comes when i think

real hard about it

thinking of what i lost

moving away from the people 

i have know, the people who have loved me

i belonged to them and they belonged to me

i felt there love even when they were away

just can't bear o think about it

as i go to sleep, thinking about it

i just wipe it away

consoling my self 

that one time one day

i will be back to them

and they will embrace me just like 

they did, en just like that 

i will be their's again

and them, mine forever

never to part...

Author's Note

just love it... en any constructive ideas r welcome, thanxx again

Reviews

[AYVID N]

I loved it. Sometimes we have to think hard to be able to cry. Thats actually sad. Not even having the luxury of tears only pain.
Wonderful.

[luviva]

thanxx...:D

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

I appreciate the way you capture your feelings, the structure is well constructed. But many atimes make it more poetic rather than prose formate.

[luviva]

lesson learnt!!,
thanxx for the review
real constructive!!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you talk about belonging to a family/community in such a nostalgic, endearing way

you also talk about missing these bonds in such a vivid, emotive fashion.....

you need to correct your slight spelling errors, otherwise I think quite a powerful recollection, thanks.

[luviva]

thank you so much for the review
< _ >

[Starfruitanimal]

heart felt :)

[luviva]

well thanxx

[Shellie]

Apart from the typos, its grand. !

[luviva]

thank you"!!

[Siren]

Touching. I really love how this can apply to a lot of different situations. Great work once again!

[luviva]

thank you...:D

[Blue Ivory]

Yes, the process of crying oneself to sleep...I am all too familiar with it. You have a few typos, dear. Just type a little slower, and be more careful, and then your poems will be perfect!

[luviva]

thank you, i will try my best with the spell checkss!!

[khalid]

very sweet and nice. very hard to be apart from those with whom we like to be. our hearts are then like a volcano about to explode with all the lave it has inside. i hope nobody would be apart from the people they love, i know it is impossible, but..what else to do? thank you for the nice weet poem..it is a feeling provoking poem..

[luviva]

thanxx for that!!
reall appreciate it:D

[khalid]

my pleasure

[scripted]

just love it... okay
nice piece

[luviva]

thank you...

[beautiful dreamer]

i do love it. its very good

[luviva]

thank you