i closed the door but he is by my window!!!!

i closed the door but he is by my window!!!!

A Poem by luviva
"

i dont knw wat to say with this... just my feelings

"

it was sweet,

when we first started

i liked having u around..

me en you, we were set for

a great sail!

 

until that time,

when i let u out of my sight

just like that, u were gone,

slipping from my hands just

like a snow ball rolling down the

tower's stairs..

 

blamed my self for my loss..

but i was wrong all along

it was your choice..

i was an option nt a priority

as i waited around for you,

waited for your sweet voice

you were chattering away with her

and i, just kept hanging on

 

i had to do it.. just for my sake

i left u i knw but that was the right thing

i closed the door on you...

but after the truth hit u..

u r back now peering into my life

through the window when you met a closed door..

 

that part of me still loves u

because of the moments we shared,

the way you looked at me..

but some part of me is stone cold

for the way you treated me...

i loved you, will always ...

bt that is now a closed door...!

 

 

© 2012 luviva


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wow......this... explains exactly how i feel :'( the guy i just got our of a relationship he cheated on me and was always lying about his love for me... but then we had times where it was perfect and i all i wanted it to be but then i couldnt deal with it anymore.... the hurt and the pain so i told him to move on and to find someone else.... and he realized his mistakes.... idk what to do anymore but i cant get hurt again

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luviva

12 Years Ago

nah he aint worth it.. move on gal u deserve to be treated far better than he has treated u



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wow......this... explains exactly how i feel :'( the guy i just got our of a relationship he cheated on me and was always lying about his love for me... but then we had times where it was perfect and i all i wanted it to be but then i couldnt deal with it anymore.... the hurt and the pain so i told him to move on and to find someone else.... and he realized his mistakes.... idk what to do anymore but i cant get hurt again

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luviva

12 Years Ago

nah he aint worth it.. move on gal u deserve to be treated far better than he has treated u

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KENT, Gillingham , United Kingdom



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I am me... but further more, I am fundraising for TEARFUND a christian charity organisation working with local churches in deprived areas to create everlasting change. TEARFUND has patterned with .. more..

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