enslaved by my own mind

slavery, ended a long time ago

but i still stay a victim of it

so tell me how to overcome it

when my mind is a turmoil?

 

i dont know what to do, say or think

am enslaved by my own mind

a mind so encorrupted,

that my life is no good

 

 i have lost total control of my life

my mind leads and i follow

how did i end up like this?

 

how did u end up like that?

how can life be your own master

the life you are entitled to live

ends up living you..

 

turn around my dear friend

open your eyes wider

you have total control of your life

and you decide what to do with it

 

so follow the life's lead

no more,

take charge take the steerng wheel

off your mind, let your mind cause no more tears.

 

 

Author's Note

yeh i just i dnt knw i wasnt in the right mood when writing this.. en discussions r welcome

Reviews

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Hi luviva
A poem of existential angst, the likes ofwhich we've all written about at sometime or another. I'm sure...
I feel like discussing the premise you've put forth: that life enslaves the mind. But I'd end up writing atleast 6 pages of philosophicaal essay, and I wish to spare us both that toil.

[luviva]

thanxx and u r ryt!!! thanxx for the review