MY MISTAKES !!!!!!!!!!

WHEN I DID TME PASS ...

I DIDNT KNOW THE WROTH OF TME ..

WHEN I SHOWED RICHNESS...

I DIDNT KNOW THE VALUE OF BEING POOR ..

WHEN I MADE ENMIES ...

I DIDNT KNEW THE VALUE OF FRIENDS..

WHEN  WAS BAD TO SOME ONE ..

I DIDNT KNEW SOME ONE WAS GOOD TO ME ..

WHEN I THOUGHT OF LEAVING MY LFE ...

I DIDNT KNEW THAT SOME PRAYED FOR MY LONGER LIFE ..

WHEN I WAS IN ANGER ..

I DINT KNOW THAT BURNING COAL WUD HURT ME FIRST ..

WHEN I TRIED TO CRUSH OTHERS..

I DIDNT KNEW THAT THEY WUD CRY WHEN  WAS IN MY DOOM..

SO BE AT YOUR BEST TO BE BLESSD...

BCOS THERE IS VERY LITTLE TIME

WHEN WE ARE GOOD TO OTHERS ..

TRY TO RESPECT THEN REGREET !!!!!!11

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is so much honesty and power in your words. Gripping and forceful, you give us all a lesson in life.. I can relate so well.

[Enigma]

Great write!! But there are typing mistakes.And using short hand writing over here....umm....it really doesn't fit!!
Otherwise the poem's 'AWESOME!!' =D