True friend

When the burden of life is

too much 

as the rain 
to the cloud 

and you are so tuckered out 
that you can't bear

any more
the weight and pressure 

your legs are dead 
you feel burned out 

and out of coldness 
you condense and freeze 

though you try hard 
to conceal 

but the wind knows all 
and tells


different stories 
with hundred photographs 

real and genuine 
through your 

beautiful and bright eyes
only a true friend knows 

how to read 
and what goes inside your soul.

Author's Note

I hope you like it

Reviews

[Karina M.]

This was a nice poem. It really shows how true friends really are.

[~]

Yes, I did like it. I loved the image of the rain and the mountain. true friends!! well done!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I really like this...only a true friend will be willing to get to know you and stay by you through thick or thin. You wrote this wonderfully, I liked how you compared things.

Good Job

[Mizuki Yoshida]

thank you , am glad you like it

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

this is utterly amazing and so true. Ive been through some pretty horrible things and I would probably be dead were it not for my two true friends

[Mizuki Yoshida]

Thank you , it always good to have someone that will always be there no matter what

[Alia ZJ.]

I loved it. It suits the way my best friend has always been to me. This is a classic tribute to a true friend. :')

[Mizuki Yoshida]

glad you like , too bad i don,t have true friend but i do enjoy writing this

[Alia ZJ.]

You'll find one, don't worry. ;)
In the meanwhile, call your words your best friends. :D

[Mizuki Yoshida]

best friend ........... ok that sound like a better name thank