WHOLE BEINGS

for emily

I can’t be certain but

I’m pretty sure

inside of you is

half of me

                 for

                     only when we’re

                     together 

                     do I feel complete

                                                            and

                                                            through my eyes 

                                                            the moon is full

                                                            dancing 

                                                            in the reflection of your 

                                                            smile

                                                            so sweet 

                                                            to have you by my side

                                                            where we

                                                            belong

                                                            made from each other

                                                            for each other

                     I can’t be certain but

                     I’m pretty sure 

Reviews

[lizardbrain]

beautiful :) it's a hard feeling to put words to but you've done a wonderful job

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the object of this poem has to be beaming...such love...yes, i am pretty sure there is an abundance as evidenced by this moving piece.
j.

[lua]

its hard to word such intense emotion, thank you :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A creative poetic homage to someone very close to your heart - I love the format structure and the simplicity of wordplay that conveys such impact and imagery - well done... :-)

[lua]

thank you!! :)