THE MASTERPLAN

but where do you fit in?

was I created for life

or

was life created for me

is it my right to pick the flowers

that blossom below me as

I climb the tree that stands as

still as my mind when my head tips back

the sky flooding into my eyes

the sun nestling deep in my heart whilst

the clouds collect in my brain

 

or is this just nature’s distraction

so I do not notice it is sculpting me

to fit perfectly into its

masterplan 

Reviews

[Omikron]

I really like this poem. I read it out loud, and I must say it sounds alot better and gets more depth than when in writing, but that's just the type of poem it is, and I really like it.

Many thoughts enter my head when reading this... That's the kind of poetry I like the most, the kind that makes you think, makes you feel the curiosity of a child, makes you wonder.

Good job.

// O

[lua]

thank you, i'm pleased you liked it :)

[Bo Lanier]

creative and wonderfully written. i like it.

[lua]

thank you!

[Sonakshi Arora]

Very deep. You write amazing! :)

[lua]

thank you :)