The Way He Is

And it's that way he looks at me
The way he holds me
The way he kisses me
The way he talks to me
The million ways that being together feels

And it's the way he sings
The way he dances
The way he touches
The way he smiles
The million ways emotions are ignited

And it's the way he laughs
The way his eyes crinkle
The way his voice sounds
The way he shines
The million ways we say 'I Love You'

And it's the way he dresses
The way he sleeps
The way he contemplates
The way he try's
The millions upon millions of ways our hearts beat for each other

Author's Note

criticism, advice, ect...appreciated and welcomed
i wasn't sure if i wanted to put this up or not since it's not one of my favorite pieces, but i thought what the hell, why not. it can't hurt right?

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love this! I have been told by a few to never begin a sentence with And i still do tho as i love the way it somehow changes how the words read .. if that makes sense.. i love it!
This is a beautiful poem great flow.. love it.. glad you put it up.
Chloe
also going to my favs

[deadlife]

It is going straight to my favourites..it's such a beauty.
Very nice..the only thing i'd say in the line The Way He Try's ... I just missed the meaning in that,methink it's a mistake..means that " Try's ".
Otherwise it is wonderfully written.
Thank you.

Blessings...

~rupam

[Rachel DeHart]

:]
Again, gorgeous.
I really enjoy your word choices.
Great job again.