So Much

So Much

A Poem by Lunar Lightning

You have so much to learn

New to this world and blind to its dangers

So small and helpless

Too fragile to let you free

I'll watch you grow and learn

As time goes by a year in a night

And when it's time for you to leave me

I only hope I've taught you right

But for now you have so much to learn

And I so much to teach

 

You have so much to teach

New to this world and blind to its dangers

And yet you come with many lessons

Things for me to discover

How to care for others

Despite y spoiled nature

And when it's time for you to leave me

I only hope I've learned it all

But for now I have so much to learn

And you so much to teach

© 2009 Lunar Lightning


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I can tell this is very emotional and heart-felt. It has a nice flow and very detailed lines. I especially like the line "As time goes by a year in a night" I just think it's a good way to tell time moving by quickly in a short amount of time. Amazing poem Love, keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can tell this is very emotional and heart-felt. It has a nice flow and very detailed lines. I especially like the line "As time goes by a year in a night" I just think it's a good way to tell time moving by quickly in a short amount of time. Amazing poem Love, keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lunar Lightning
Lunar Lightning

Boney Lake, WA



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My name is Antonia Gabrielle Jones, I am 16, and I am a million contradictions, all wrapped up in one human being. I am an optomistic pessimist, outgoing shy girl, violent passivist, bluntly honest pe.. more..

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