Like You Did

Like You Did

A Poem by Lunar Lightning
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This is a poem by a friend of mine named Anna Hughes

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  so kiss me like you did,
my heart stopped beating.

so love mw like you did,
the memorise are fleeting.

so hold me like you did,
i promise not to go.

so have me like you did,
digging deep below.

so hide me like you did,
take away my presence.

so leave me like you did,
evacuate my essence.

so hate me like you did,
dont clot my endless bleeding.

so kill me like you did,
my heart stoped beating.

© 2009 Lunar Lightning


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That was freakin awesome. I loved it!!! :) It was so right down to the point. Great Work and thnx 4 the revview!

Posted 15 Years Ago


feels kinda suzanna veg-ish or that irish chik that peed on the popes picture. good ryhme scheme, technically sound. have she thought of adding to it at all? just curious.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Lunar Lightning
Lunar Lightning

Boney Lake, WA



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My name is Antonia Gabrielle Jones, I am 16, and I am a million contradictions, all wrapped up in one human being. I am an optomistic pessimist, outgoing shy girl, violent passivist, bluntly honest pe.. more..

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