My dear Pierre

Please forgive me if this takes some time.
I just got to tell you what’s on my mind.
I’m sorry for the stuttering,
Its just that my hearts beating,
So fast it may just crash.
I’m getting off track.
I may seem silly and dense,
That’s because I don’t have a lot of confidence.
In myself but here I go anyways.
I have something that I have to say,
If you would just not walk away.

The silence is starting to kill me,
Cause my heart starting to bleed,
My mind plays dirty tricks,
Oh god I think I getting sick.
I just can’t take anymore.
I go to reach for the door,
With these tears in my eyes.
I really don’t want to cry,
And I don’t want my heart to break,
I hold back a sob as I start to shake.

I wait a second and say a quick prayer,

that you would stop me before i leave you my dear Pierre,

but you just stay silent and stare my way,

so i walked out the door much to my hearts dismay.

Reviews

[Lena]

I love this! It is very familiar to me, wanting that special someone to say something, anything "but you just stay silent and stare my way". Well written and smooth to follow and fall in love with.