King of Mine

Care to take a look in my life?

All I’ve been seeing is yours.

 

Your problems

Your worries

Your social insecurities,

That you think the world revolves around.

 

I want to say,

Please look my way.

Friend, I need your once loving glance.

 

As if in a trance you talk

And walk all over my receipting ears.

 

It appears to me

Your majesty,

You fancy yourself the king of melodramatics.

 

But I will not be the clown in your castle

The jester in your court.

 

So here I say

Not one more day

Will I stay your fool.

 

Your Majesty,

Your confessor is no more.

 

Author's Note

i wrote this about a friend of mine...he was pissin me off.

Reviews

[RickyP18]

It seems that you had to go deep to come up with this.

[J.M]

It drives me mad when people always talk and are too self-absorbed to listen. Its always nice when you find people who do. I loved the fluctuations in the length of the stanzas and thought it was a great poem.

[lynne]

this is so true about some people! They only care about themselves, and they don't notice the people who care about them! Wonderful job! This was an excellent write ^^

[micayla3]

Amazing job, sometimes our friends don't see how much we need them. They only talk about their feelings. Great write!