Rain

Rain

 

I sometimes wonder about the rain.

The way it sparkles as falls,

Like a gathering of crystals on the ground,

Then a disappearing act as it becomes one with the world.

 

I taste its essence and smile.

Feeling it sink into my flesh,

Dancing on my eyelids,

And talking with my soul,

We become friends in seconds.

 

What things I think of in the rain,

I pretend I am a dancer of the highest quality.

My feet slide in tune with the world.

And joy fills the air.

 

Oh how I wish I could take these feelings with me.

The love,

The laughter,

The belonging.

But I must leave them as the sky dries,

Returning to reality.

 

But I keep in mind

That I will see another rainy day,

The sky sure does love to cry.

Author's Note

i've been having writers block...ugh so please review:)...it just started to rain after i wrote this...creepy! haha

Reviews

[Another Relic]

You've got such a wonderful style to your writing. It has a maturity to it that comforts the reader knowing there are no spelling errors, bad grammer or formatting problems to bump into. This is another great poem I've read by you and it's going into my favorites.

[Samantha]

lol that is creepy. Cute poem. I enjoyed it. It flowed beautifully.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

I decided to reread some of your work today and like I already said about three months ago... this is one of your absolute best pieces. It is ...... just..... beautiful!

[Rupid]

Surely you rainy days.

[sammyj]

i like this

[The Water Queen]

The rain. In my opinion the way the world weeps in either happiness or sadness. And to write about it sends a challenge far harder then most. The description of rain is stunning and gives the reader a chance at some beautiful imagery. This is a lovely poem.

the reviews are so descriptive that i dont think i need to read the poem. good job

Not a big fan of rain. So of course that scews my opion of this poem but i still think its a little moment made into a huge thing.

[Tina Kline]

A really fantastic piece. You capture the fun and beauty of rain in this. Excellent job.

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Oh my goddess !!!!!!!! how I love the rain. Such vivid emotions and descriptions. It made me sense that you have a sense of belonging when in the rain, as do I. This is your absolute best yet Mary!!!!!!! I CRIED!!!!!!!!! I lovvvvvoooooovvvvved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!