My Friend

Hello,

My new little friend.

 

Your fur is like snow,

Your eyes like fresh blueberries

 

You hop and play

Around my little yard

 

It is the west,

And you are Lewis and Clark

 

What will you discover,

In this uncharted land?

 

Will birds dance?

On the ground singing of a better tomorrow,

 

Will frogs play,

A fetching game of scrabble?

 

Will flowers listen,

To me and all my friends?

 

Oh how we love to talk,

Our dreams are endless.

 

What is your discovery my friend,

Have you fulfilled your curiosity?

 

Did you see,

The dog with all knowing eyes?

 

He is kind my friend,

You should pay him a visit.

 

He loves company,

Just the other day I saw him talking with Mr. Blue Jay

 

You will find a home here,

Just don’t get lost in the pond of plastic

 

It will swallow you whole,

I don’t want to lose you my friend.

 

So be careful,

And don’t trust Mr. Tinkles.

 

He is a compulsive liar,

My friend.

Author's Note

PLEASE tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

I liked it! ;p

Alice in wonderland. Thats all i have to say.

[loverly9316]

OMG i loved it. it made me think of my cats lol one went exploring yesterday and didnt come home all day long and i was worried sick . . . . (i think he went down to the lake behind our house) but this poem is awesome its sweet and flowy again i love it

[Allison]

Very light hearted and fun.
Very nice :)

[Tina Kline]

I really like this one a lot. Its cute and has a happy feeling to it.

[J. C. Koch]

I like it, its got a springtime kind of feel (at least thats how i read it) to it. But encouraging a cat and dog to play together? thats just asking for trouble... hahaha, jkjk

[St.Jimmy]

it was nice to read
a cute one
but doesn't look like a poem
the reason behind it in my opinion is it has lost its flow
you can put rhymes in it to make it flow better
Except the above quality
poem is cute
~Aaradhya