Organic Machine

Silky silence

Lingering

Between breaths

 

My chest goes up and down

My pulse a continuous beat

I am an organic machine

 

My purpose predetermined

My choices choiceless

My value diminished

 

But my will is strong

My smile angelic,

And my love fresh.

 

My indifference

And denial

Always in place

I am a clueless calculator.

 

Author's Note

please tell me what you think!!!

Reviews

This is a poem that makes me feel that you are listing mood swings.

[Tina Kline]

This is fantastic. Over all, I think its just a wonderful poem.

[The Official Gary B]

This is a really good poem! =)))) Its speaks a lot!

[alyssa]

i love the lines...
"My indifference

And denial

Always in place

I am a clueless calculator"!!!
Amazing write!!!
alyssa

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

I love the line "I am a clueless calculator"^^ Great write ....one of your best!!!! love it!!!!!!