Color

Just a poem i came up with, i hope you like it:)

The colored dreams haunt me

Every waking moment

They are there

Hung in the air

Like woven tapestry,

 

I can not escape

Their clenching beauty

It suffocates me,

The breath streams from my lungs

I am no longer

The mundane

Or of the living.

 

I am one with color

No longer just one

I am many

I am a blur

And a clear picture

 

I am beauty

I am everything,

And nothing

I am what lurks in the shadows of the night

The unknown

I give all a fright

Know one can know true color.

Author's Note

please tell me what you think!!!

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

great imagery of colors and what they could mean or be, awesome write

Awesome poem. It really shows what color is.

[sweetylee1994]

It was beautiful. Lovely. I enjoyed reading it. ^_^

[Ashley]

Beautiful. Deep and dripping with imagery. I absolutly loved it :)

[Eloise]

one word: amazing. i

[DBURKE]

This was a very creative poem and a really good read_ Thanks for sharing!

[Millionth Muse]

I really like the idea of "colored dreams"...sort of reminds me a little of a "lucid dream"...and the feelings mesh well with the imagery that you use in this one. I also like the "everything and nothing" idea...you might want to try and expand on that a little...maybe in another poem. Nicely done!

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

I absolutely loove it!!! It pulled me into the story deeper and deeper with each line of it. It was an amazing poem. You are very talented. (but dont get a big Ego because of it) lol

[Hopless]

it pretty good

[Megg]

Very interesting! I can completely imgaine what it would feel like becoming one with color. Great job! :) -- XOXO Megg