Darkness

a poem i wrote a long time ago

 It covers me

I can no longer see

It is like death

Eternal and cold

There is only one

Who can save me

 

He is my light

But he will never come

Because there is

No light in darkness

Author's Note

please review:)

Reviews

[princess]

fantastic i loved it great job

This is scary good. and just scary.

[Ellary™]

Mega goosebumps. Keep up the SPLENDED work!

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

(It made me want to cry!) But the lack of hope makes it enjoying to read.

;p

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with little hope. A strong poem with no wasted words. The darkness can blind us from the light. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[J. C. Koch]

love it, very dark, very romantic

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

very short but very good too! I loved it.

[John McGrael]

this is chilling....

but i like it, its cool

[Tina Kline]

A sad and chilling poem. Very impressive. I really like this one a lot!