The Breeze

The breeze is around

Unfound in the air

Everywhere

The breeze is around

The breeze is in the trees

Oh, how do you please?

The breeze is in the trees

 

Author's Note

review, even though it is really short:)thanx

Reviews

Yup This is defenitely your most embarrasing.

lololololololololol i can't take this one seriously.

[J. C. Koch]

I really like the rhythm in this one!

[Megg]

Cute. It can be taken in different lights. The breeze can represent something nice, or something mysterious and erie. It's very interesting! -- XOXO Megg

[Tina Kline]

This is very nice, kind of playful, just like the breeze can be. Can't see it but you know its there, you can see what it does to the trees. Really like this poem too!