Rachel in Colorland
A Book by Mary
 This is something i had to write for school, it is loosly based on Alice in Wonderland. I am now continuing it so it is a sorta book...  © 2010 Mary
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It is a little rushed, i had a dead line so help me improve it please:) And i thank Lewis Carroll for writing the book that started it all! Alice in Wonderland is amazing!!!
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OMG!!! I love it! can't wait to find out wat happens next... if u write wat happens next. i hope u do! U r going to get a good grade on it 4 sure! =D
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Very creative piece of writing. It reminded me of Twitches. A few grammatical errors (spelling mistakes) and spacing issues (e.g. the conversation seemed a bit compact), but overall a nicely written story :) Keep it up!
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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This is my favorite story of yours.... (:
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 30, 2010
Last Updated on March 22, 2010
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MaryCanton, OH
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