Willow Branches dancing

Willow Branches dancing

A Poem by Trisha
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In Meditation I saw a beautiful willow tree lit by lights of inspiration.

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painting destiny with the tip of its brush
light bug hues, a golden rush
wind, the fingers that strum distinctively
calling to us inside our dreams
willow, I saw you in the mist
dancing upon the sky lit bliss
was it me that you were speaking to
or was it the light laminated blue

© 2010 Trisha


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In the desert dream, we feel the stream and add light upon light to the dance. In the sound of the Harmony in Creations moving through the filter of your words. Painting a picture of delicate trancending. The willow's weeping, sweeping the breeze, in the now releasing, pleasing, teasing the musics flow.
I'm hearing... behind, the rendered scene.

Deseert Dreamer sent the conection, to say I would enjoy your writ and I have found an expression that is endearing Trisha. This has a great feel...

Write on / Right on. Romon in Review... Peace Ro.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You rock sister!! I painted a painting in honor of this...

Posted 13 Years Ago


In the desert dream, we feel the stream and add light upon light to the dance. In the sound of the Harmony in Creations moving through the filter of your words. Painting a picture of delicate trancending. The willow's weeping, sweeping the breeze, in the now releasing, pleasing, teasing the musics flow.
I'm hearing... behind, the rendered scene.

Deseert Dreamer sent the conection, to say I would enjoy your writ and I have found an expression that is endearing Trisha. This has a great feel...

Write on / Right on. Romon in Review... Peace Ro.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trish... this really is beautiful, I'm reading this at work and I read it out loud to my coworker. " light bug hues, a golden rush" brings the image of tiny fireflies lighting up as they fly in between the willow's branches. Truly excellent sister :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful! Amazing what we see when we are not looking, times such as in meditiation or in dreams. I imagine that this tree was "calling to us inside our dreams" as you say and reminding us that we are all part of nature.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poem is beautiful. Nothing as good as free time with nature and having dreams appears create hope and good memories. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

thank you faryn. The light bug hue refers to a tree I saw in meditation. Light Bugs that seem to surround an old willow tree in the depths of my imagination.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a heavenly piece of work!
There are a few word mistakes, though. Perhaps you meant 'illuminated' instead of 'laminated'? And I don't think I quite understand 'light bug hues'.
All the same, the world flow is beautiful, and the subject is excellent. Good job.

-Faryn

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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