Harmony

 

 

loving you is like a song I replay
a wave of emotion I keep at bay
a poem of harmony and caress
passionate strings we both possess
wandering into the world of imagination
weaving a story of unlimited passion
music, a grove of endless love open
stimulating sunlight an audio explosion
sonic energy, a boom box of defeat
sanctuary, a piece of what inspires me
your grove is the sound of electric love
rhythmic memory crafted from the world above
your music a disguised ecstasy
a peaceful blues melody
exercising what lies deep inside
wrapped around your words defined

I'm So In Love............

Author's Note

Opening up to the passion that lies inside

Reviews

[Onyx_Rayne]

The entire piece has a dreamy, relaxing quality to it, describing the way love should truly feel.
"your music a disguised ecstasy
a peaceful blues melody
exercising what lies deep inside
wrapped around your words defined"....
Love it... absolutely beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. The gentle feeling of passion and desire of love are in your words. A pleasure to read. Thank you.
Coyote

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautiful use of metaphors within this peice. And flowed great. Excellent, Trisha. Nicely done.


Great Write.
Rayne

[Fantasyfairy]

I like the methophors in this. Such a romantic and passionate piece. To be in love and that much in harmaony with each other is wonderful. A wonderful write. XX

[Diamondjules]

Sonic energy - the boom box line kicks a*s sister - you have always rocked my friend. I loved it!