Untitled, for the time being.

I'm not sure where this is going yet; wanted opinions and critique before I continued.

I watched the flickering candle intently, feeding the letter little by little into the flame. The smoke swirled in the air, undisturbed by the lack of wind.  Blinking hard, I shoved the entire paper into the glass jar that held the candle and let it turn to ash before my eyes.  

Reviews

[janiksxxl]

I need to switch off my brain before I yet have one. 1..2..4..8..16..parallel ideas to continue the story. I think You should give it a try.

[Veronica Nicole]

Thank you, I surely will. :)

[Lena Rossmore]

Very intriguing start, I think it has great potential to go somewhere. Hoping to see more soon. :)

[Veronica Nicole]

Merci beaucoup :)
I like to see if there's interest in what I am working on before I invest a lot of time in it, that way I won't let myself doubt that it's worth writing.

[Lena Rossmore]

I agree, but I really think this is a story worth pursuing.

[Veronica Nicole]

Well thank you! :)
I wrote a little bit more already, but I want to wait till I have the chapter finished to post the rest. I'm hoping to have it up by Saturday night, if you're interested. :)

[Lena Rossmore]

Yes! I can't wait to read it :)