Alone.

just how I'm feeling.

Your gentle touch, 

meant to soothe me,

stirs my loneliness more. 

Your sad blue eyes misread my soul. 

You draw back, 

with good intentions,

but how could this be what is best? 

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

With a piece like this, one can only wonder if after every line of ink, there is a spoken line left invisible. Lets see if I can do it justice, shall we?

The invisible Ink
Line 1 "Oh my, it gives me goose bumps!"
Line 2 "I can't stop shaking inside!"
Line 3 "Great! Now I can't get you out of my head!"

Line 4 "Wait! That's not what you think!"

Line 5 "No! Come back! Please be patient!"
Line 6 "Dang it! Why was I hiding what I was feeling."
Line 7 "It can't end this way! I really do need you!"

That's what popped into my head as I read your piece... like another voice speaking out from behind the ink. =)

Thanks for sharing!
Aaron

[Veronica Nicole]

Haha, this made me smile. Thank you! :)

[zainul]

Looks very nice.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I love it. Short and sweet- it shows how quickly a situation can turn around. Great work.

[Veronica Nicole]

Thank you! :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

No problem :)