I Mean This

This is one of the first poems I wrote, and that was maybe 5 years ago, so forgive me if it's not wonderful. teehee.

Was it merely a dream?

Or some cold, harsh reality?

Are these just faded memories?

Will it ever turn out right?

I’m sick of the fights,

I want to remember the good,

not the bad.

I want to remember your smile,

your eyes, most of all

You. 

Reviews

[GreenIvy]

This reminds me of a very close friend that i have.

We had some complications causing us to go our separate ways but somehow, we ended up being friends again. But the relationship we have now is different because we've changed so much since the parting.

"I want to remember your smile,
your eyes, most of all

You."

This quote explains how i feel now. I want things to be like they use to be between her and i.

Anyway, great write. Well done.

[Wolfwind]

Every moment in life has those golden nugget moments that we shall always cherish, long after the moment has drifted away. I think your words bring across that idea really well.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Whiskurz]

I thought this was quite Beautiful.......Whisk

[Veronica Nicole]

Thank you so much :)