Not The Rain

A poem to my sister.

You don’t believe in what you claim

Full of breath in refrain

Believe me dear you are to blame

Blame your brain

Not the rain

 

Opinions, I fear, you can’t contain

Thoughts of death to maintain

Upon me you do so wane

Blame your brain

Not the rain

 

Chaos (you suppose) you can tame

Chaos within your mainframe

Madness that pumps within the vein

Blame the brain

And not the rain

 

 

Angel Luna-Vazquez

1.28.2011 4:35PM

Reviews

[Kora Williams]

I loved this, your words and your flow are both very inspiring. Looking forward to more of your work!

[Angel]

Kora, Thanks for your words. I've been away for a very long time traveling. I am back and I am looking forward to reading from you also.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Blame the brain
And not the rain"
I like the story and the logic of this poem. Some of us do run in circles. Know chaos only. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Angel]

Coyote, Thanks for your kind words. I am glad that this poem spoke to you. I have been gone for quite some time traveling but I am back and will be more active here.

[Coyote Poetry]

It did and I'm glad you are back.