Roller-coaster

Head jerks

Stomach lurches

Muscles tense

Thrilling sense

Scream loud

Zoom up to clouds

Shut eyes

I’m gonna die!

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

i can imagine being on this ride and the thrilling sensations it gives. great descriptive poem.

[Katelyn]

haha I agree with Rae. Amazing poem (:

[Distant horizons]

Nice. Now pass the sick bag ;-)

[BLBrown]

You made me smile. It goes to show you don't need to be verbose to convey the emotion and the physical. I wish I were brave enough to ride!!

[AK]

Wow! A short poem but conveys the precise feeling when one is on a roller coaster. Brilliant imagery. I loved it!

[ba_mcfarlane]

playful..well done!

[Rae Emeral]

I absolutely love this! Its so simple, but brings a smile to my face. I adore roller coasters and I can feel this poem as I read it. Awesome job! Fantastic description! It's so accurate and thrilling! Wonderful! :D
~Rae Emeral

[khalid]

simple and expressing. nice work

[Kuhr Gred]

haha.. i like it.. i remember , when i shout in anchor's away.. i got shout it loud.. good job

[Cherrie]

Magnificent! Someone get me a ticket