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For a competition. First few sentences of a story.

Five lives. Five lives to take. One to spare. Who will it be? I’ve been told to follow my heart. But somehow, my heart always manages to make the wrong decisions.

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

This really sounds like it could make an interesting story.

[iliketowrite]

Hii luna ^-^
because you've only written out the first few sentences and haven't done anything more since March, I'm guessing you're not going to post the rest of it upp..
BUT I LOVE IT!! It seems like it would make an amazing story.. I really would like to read the rest. obviously it's your choice, but if you've written any more of it haven't put it up here, pleease put it up..
XD xxx

[RosaliaSky]

I hope you post the rest of the story, this beginning has me hooked. I like how you use very short sentences. I also like how you use the old saying of following your heart and how you contradict it in the next sentence. It seems like a very interesting beginning. "Five lives to take. One to spare." I can’t wait to see where this story goes, and who your narrator is and why they have to take lives and how their heart always seems to make wrong choices. Please continue to write this out!!

[Abbie]

Simple, yet sweet. I like it. Nice write! :D

[AK]

Very nice! Very few words, but these words mean a lot! Great write!