Living Dead

Living Dead

A Poem by luna11

I watched myself disintegrate,

I fell into my demise.

Still I choose to isolate

The corpse that lies inside.


What is alive is slain,

But no one sees the stain

Of the veiled blood.


Oh trail of agony,

You are my consumer. 

Oh glimmer of sanity, 

You whisper the future.

If there is a strength
With the power
To revive the living dead,
Then let it be my hero.

© 2013 luna11


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luna11
Not sure about this one. Please review :)

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You are very talented and you write beyond your years...Bravo............

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

luna11

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much:)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
It's a beautiful poem. A splendid read!!!
Thank you for posting it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


luna11

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like the imagery of decay and the downfall being picked up by the 'glimmer of sanity' great work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


luna11

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!:)

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Added on October 18, 2013
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luna11
luna11

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Luna. I'm 14. I write mostly poetry. I enjoy writing stories but I never get them finished, so most of my writing on here is poetry. I feel like I'm getting much better at writing. Looking .. more..

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