Somewhere Under the Rainbow

Somewhere Under the Rainbow

A Poem by Sophie

If life was a dream,

I would jump and dance

happy to be free,

free from reality.


Reality weighs a spirit down,

Reality is somewhere under the rainbow,

where Dorothy is still in black and white

and the witch's broom

is a lowly bicycle.

Wouldn't you rather a dream world

made of colors and light?


If life as I know it now was a dream,

and I were to suddenly wake up,

into a world worse than this,

where the witch defeats me,

and Uncle Henry beats me,

Maybe I'll want to sleep,

but now I can't decide,

the unknown?

Or this dream?

© 2012 Sophie


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Life can be like a nightmare. I like the story in this poem.
"Maybe I'll want to sleep,
but now I can't decide,
the unknown?
Or this dream?"
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


like it!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes we wish our dreams to turn reality......
Nice and not just that-It's Good,Beautifully written

Posted 12 Years Ago


It does feel like this sometimes. We prefer dreams to the reality because it feels better. Nice work

Posted 12 Years Ago


good i sent read request :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm expecting Leo DiCaprio to jump out at any moment talking nonsence about dreams and inception and what not :P
Really good. Pessimistic. But good. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Inspiring. Kinda got a sprinkle of inception ;-) Awakening as well, making sure we're not taking life for granted. Nice poem!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this. Especially the title.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dream! Dream every time. Lovely write. Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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