Hero

Hero

A Poem by Sophie

I'll save you

I'll catch you when you fall

Be your shoulder for crying

I'll be your running start


I'll be your hero

and I'll be your knight

on a white horse

making sure you watch your step

making sure you choose right

instead of darkness, choose light

Choose me.

Choose me.


© 2012 Sophie


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The knight in shining armour, so sweet. I like the shortness, it simply says what it should say.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is really interesting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice. Simple but powerful.
Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aren't we all just waiting for our knight in shining armor? =P Nice poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this poem. Life is funny. People who catch us are usually a very good catch. They love us for who we are. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


the ending diconnects form the begining a bit...good work, but not my favorite of yours...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw :) This was so sweet! Now if only boys could string words like that. I'd probably attack them xD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aw so cute :) I love it. Knights on white horses are always so awesome ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


its gud..................

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully expressed feeling of being a guardian angel to that one person.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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