The Change

Just a crappy poem.

The winds of change are calling

New, changed leaves are falling,

Difference this wind will bring

but of what

does the wind sing?

As it blows

Some know

But others don;t realize

until it is right in front of their eyes

The Change

washes over me

flowing into my lungs

fixing all that is wrong.

Take a clear breath,

for the first time in a while.

The wind cleansed me

of all that was vile.

Author's Note

ugh, you reeally don't need to review this :P

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

So it's not your best. Its an intriguing idea, of the wind bringing change, and if you wanted I'm sure you could improve it. Like Abbie pointed out, it's don' t not don;t, that's the only grammatical error I found.
It is an ok poem, logicsal and direct. Thank you.

[MandaBear]

First off, this poem is not THAT bad. But everyone is entitled to a poem that they dont like every once in a while. But we know that you are an amazing writer so we can overlook this one :) Dont fret over it. Good try anyway:)

[bethany cullen]

Must say I agree with others not your best write but it's a bit of a change from Ur usual lol xx good write but you CAN do better :) X

[Amanda]

Kind of confused but still a good poem

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of changes are coming. A wise person is prepared and ready for change. I like the flow of thoughts and the logic in the words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Odayin]

So naturally were all gonna ignore the authors note and review anyway.
Well I definitely think you have an excellent idea here and it may have sounded a little different in your head, but when everyone reads it, they will all take it differently from one another and some will look into it more than others.
I for one, really enjoyed this life about nature and how it can heal those unphysical wounds

[Wild Willow Blue]

I don't think this is crappy, and I'm going to review it. I agree with Abby down below, this does not seem like 100% what you write, but it's really not as bad as you think. I read it twice, and the second time I got the feeling of kind of loss that was reversed, I guess you could say. I actually enjoyed this, so don't beat yourself up. It's a good piece.

[Destinyxi]

It's a nice poem haha, not bad at all. Reminds me of the fall :) When the leaves start to fall off the trees and are whipped away by the wind.

[Lydia]

I agree with you that it's not your best, but I still think that it's really good.

[Michael Thrower]

I will review it :D But I don't have much to say besides that it sounds like the seasons are changing and to whatever change it made, you like it.