Unspoken (two)

The words I left unspoken

may have been the ones to save myself

The words I left unsaid

could have saved me the turmoil

in my head.

Beautiful sounds like:

I love you

Don't let me go

Kiss me

Or less sacred things like:

Go away

I have nothing to say

I don't want you to see me cry.

And then, solely to myself,

away from prying ears,

I just want to die.

Those were the worst,

the ones that chilled me to my bones

I didn't mean it,

the burst forth without thinking first

And as I clapped my hands over my mouth,

my wish practically came true

because, in that moment, I lost you.

Author's Note

Which Unspoken do you like better?

Reviews

[JanieB]

The first one for me. :)

[RetroVertigo]

That is nearly f#cking GENIUS!!! Really good stuff.

[MandaBear]

i liked this one better

[Clara Nicole]

I liked them both very well. I think i like this one a little better, but the first one was also very good

[SuicidePact.]

I liked this one