Murder

Murder

A Poem by Sophie
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eh...

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A human soul

a human life

taken because of another's

human strife


Murder, a word that sends chills

down my spine

How can you be afraid of death

when you took another person's

final breath?


You slayed another soul

and yet, you escape

without paying the toll

You deserve the same sentence

For causing their ascendance


You horrible creature,

you killed another soul.

Took their life away.

You are not nature, or god,

whatever you choose to believe in

You do not get the right,

nor can you hold a facade

for long.

© 2012 Sophie


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Sophie
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wonderful poetry great job well done keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really really deep :) great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow honestly this was really deep and i felt soemthing when reading this, I can't explain what exactly what i felt was but this was amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love this, its pointing the finger of blame. great point of view

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A Poem by Sophie