HD TV

HD TV

A Poem by Sophie

The image is so clear!

I can see every blade of grass!

Their faces spread in glee

at their new HD TV


A pine needle just fell,

I saw it, clear as a bell!

Oh, really?

Because I can see

every needle on that real, living tree


You're so amazed

at the images given to you

You won't take enough time

to see

the beauty

of real nature

That wastes away

because of our ignorance

and incompetence.

© 2012 Sophie


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Sophie
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its nice, one of those words i dnt understand but everything else fits.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful job :) Fun poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like the message you put out in this poem. It's true that may people sit around and watch TV or play video games all day without stepping foot outside and they can't witness the beauty of nature. Good job. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

At first, it seemed like this piece was all about how great TV is, but then you turned it around to point out the nature of humans concerning nature. Well done. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful poem great job i liked it thanks for sharing this with me

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poem by Sophie