Soldier

Soldier

A Poem by Sophie

The soldiers feet stomp

the sound mixing in with the thousands of others

he is one

out of many brothers


The dog tag shines

showing his honor and bravery

his skin is tanned

but covered in sand, feeling papery


His eyes are cold,

the thoughts behind them unheard

he's worried that war

is ruining humanity's one world.

© 2012 Sophie


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Beautiful thoughts in so little words.....Great write.....Whisk

Posted 12 Years Ago


War doesnt ruin humanity world.peace wont come without bloodshed.so its clear,they fight coz they want peace.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this.. So wonderful, meaningful and short.
Well done! :D Thanks for sharing..

Posted 12 Years Ago


thanks for sharing your lovely work i liked this short poem i liked reading it great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love the ending, so powerful and true... I feel it is wise to prepare for war, but foolish to seek it out...how about you?

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good job sophie. i wonder what soldiers are thinking. i wonder if they feel they have time to think. great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a really meaningful sophie. I really like the idea that war is ruining the world, because honestly, I think it is. The soldiers thoughts, I wonder if that is what every soldier is thinking.... Overall, good poem sophie! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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