River

A Poem by Sophie

wrote this in 6th grade.

The waves crash
torrents swirl
icicles drip
icy fingers curl

the cold water holds
pushing down
never again
will I see the sun of gold

currents wind
rain whips
the storm thrashes
the cold water grips

© 2012 Sophie

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MandaBear

I think its just fine. very good for writing in 6th grade

Posted 12 Years Ago

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