Music

a QWERTY poem, its about music... somehow

Queen-like, wonderfully elegant, rays to your unending illuminated opus, pretending

a song, days forgotten, greater highs jested, kingdoms lit

zealously, xylophones caressed, vibrations bring noise. Music.

Author's Note

a QWERTY poem

Reviews

[Odayin]

I've never heard of a qwerty poem, but since you've written every type of poetry there is..I'm not surprised to have found one by you.
Well this is clearly tougher than it looks as you are quite limited on letters such as "x" and "z" but you seemed to have gotten along quite fine.
This really does represent music...or at least enough of it does.
I thought this was really nice Sophie, 26 words that seem to be getting along just fine:)

[Sophie]

Hey so, I'm just gonna translate this poem, it's a qwerty poem, so it doesn't really make sense.
Elegant, shining music, pretending to be a song, when you listen days go by, happiness joked, kingdoms lit afire, xylophnes caressed, vibrations bring noise. music.

Thanks for the reviews everyone!

[Manda]

Interesting. It seems almost forced, though. You had great analogies and comparisons, but that's it. I would like to read more about the experience of these adjectives, more emotion than description.

[Abbie]

interesting poem. nice write, not my favorite, but still nice. keep writing.

[SuicidePact.]

This is great.

[jennifer little]

nice write thanks for sharing this

[Archia]

This was very beautiful and I'm really impressed that you could make it work so in such a fashion.